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Daddy’s hand [probably a teeeeny bit NSFW poem]


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She waits for him 

Hair tied, Hands bound 

Eyes to the floor 

Just like he asked

Not making a sound 

 

He enters the door

His presence takes the space 

Puts down his things 

His finger under her chin 

‘Show me that pretty lil face’

 

Her heart beats fast

Cheeks flush as cherry wine 

His hand grazes her cheek

His thumb to her lips 

‘You know you’re all mine’ 

 

He lifts her up 

Holding her tiny little waist 

Carries her through 

Places her down 

Eager to get a taste 

 

Gently tracks the freckles 

Within her inner thigh 

Her inner thoughts 

Are all with him 

How did we get so high 

 

He kisses every freckle 

As he makes his way up top

Strokes her hair 

His little doll

She doesn’t ever want this to stop

 

He holds her hands above her

Tells her no, not until I say 

Her breathing deepens 

Her body craving 

‘Daddy just wants to play’ 

 

She’s waiting for permission

Given up all control 

She squeals and begs 

He doesn’t flinch

But he is what makes her feel whole 

 

Are you ready princess

She thought he’d never ask

He holds her close 

Against him

She’s ready for her task

 

‘That’s my good girl’

There is no better sound 

His hand around her neck

Her eyes on him 

As their souls leave the ground 

 

Together they had something special

Although it wasn’t grand 

No silver or gold

Or diamond necklace 

Is finer than Daddy’s hand 

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This was actually quite good. A teeeeny bit naughty, indeed, but subtle. I liked it!!

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2 minutes ago, SteppenMe said:

This was actually quite good. A teeeeny bit naughty, indeed, but subtle. I liked it!!

Thanks so much! Really appreciate the nice feedback 😁 only teeeeeny tiny bit, depending on the reader! Thanks again :) 

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5 minutes ago, gigisweetheart said:

I appreciate when people share their work. I know it takes bravery to put art out for the world to see. I loved the flow of your poem. It sort of felt like a satin ribbon gently winding and swirling… if that makes sense, lol. Beautiful! ☺️

Aww thank you so much🥰 yeah I put on my big girl pants and shared it and it wasn’t as scary as I thought. Thank you for the nice feedback it’s very appreciated! Funny you should say that about satin actually I wrote this with the idea it would sound better to be read out loud gently with an almost soft whisper, like satin! But your comment was lovely so thank you💛

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4 hours ago, WayneDD said:

*snap snap snap* 🫰🫰🫰 bravo. 

His little doll, 'Daddy just wants to play' and As their souls leave the ground. My 3 favorite lines.

Writing USED to be a strong medium of mine. Maybe I can share some of my old poems with you sometime --orally.

Thank you very much! Not just one snap but three, clearly impressed 😁 thanks for noting your favourite parts and I’m glad you found something in the poem that resonated. Would love to hear some of your old poems (and new… I don’t think you ever lose such talents surely?) 😂

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This is such a beautiful and very moving piece, describing that special bond of love and trust.

Emotive and powerful, you have said so much with an economy of language and tremendous grace.

Your gift with words is a blessing to us all. Thank you, Littlest.

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11 minutes ago, Salmario said:

This is such a beautiful and very moving piece, describing that special bond of love and trust.

Emotive and powerful, you have said so much with an economy of language and tremendous grace.

Your gift with words is a blessing to us all. Thank you, Littlest.

This is such a kind comment. Thank you so much for your words! I am so glad that you enjoyed it and that you were able to identify with the poem in some way too. I wish you a wonderful day 😁

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