Littlest Posted November 27, 2023 Report Posted November 27, 2023 She waits for him Hair tied, Hands bound Eyes to the floor Just like he asked Not making a sound He enters the door His presence takes the space Puts down his things His finger under her chin ‘Show me that pretty lil face’ Her heart beats fast Cheeks flush as cherry wine His hand grazes her cheek His thumb to her lips ‘You know you’re all mine’ He lifts her up Holding her tiny little waist Carries her through Places her down Eager to get a taste Gently tracks the freckles Within her inner thigh Her inner thoughts Are all with him How did we get so high He kisses every freckle As he makes his way up top Strokes her hair His little doll She doesn’t ever want this to stop He holds her hands above her Tells her no, not until I say Her breathing deepens Her body craving ‘Daddy just wants to play’ She’s waiting for permission Given up all control She squeals and begs He doesn’t flinch But he is what makes her feel whole Are you ready princess She thought he’d never ask He holds her close Against him She’s ready for her task ‘That’s my good girl’ There is no better sound His hand around her neck Her eyes on him As their souls leave the ground Together they had something special Although it wasn’t grand No silver or gold Or diamond necklace Is finer than Daddy’s hand 5 1 2 1
SteppenMe Posted November 28, 2023 Report Posted November 28, 2023 This was actually quite good. A teeeeny bit naughty, indeed, but subtle. I liked it!!
Littlest Posted November 28, 2023 Author Report Posted November 28, 2023 2 minutes ago, SteppenMe said: This was actually quite good. A teeeeny bit naughty, indeed, but subtle. I liked it!! Thanks so much! Really appreciate the nice feedback 😁 only teeeeeny tiny bit, depending on the reader! Thanks again
Littlest Posted November 28, 2023 Author Report Posted November 28, 2023 5 minutes ago, gigisweetheart said: I appreciate when people share their work. I know it takes bravery to put art out for the world to see. I loved the flow of your poem. It sort of felt like a satin ribbon gently winding and swirling… if that makes sense, lol. Beautiful! ☺️ Aww thank you so much🥰 yeah I put on my big girl pants and shared it and it wasn’t as scary as I thought. Thank you for the nice feedback it’s very appreciated! Funny you should say that about satin actually I wrote this with the idea it would sound better to be read out loud gently with an almost soft whisper, like satin! But your comment was lovely so thank you💛
Littlest Posted November 29, 2023 Author Report Posted November 29, 2023 4 hours ago, WayneDD said: *snap snap snap* 🫰🫰🫰 bravo. His little doll, 'Daddy just wants to play' and As their souls leave the ground. My 3 favorite lines. Writing USED to be a strong medium of mine. Maybe I can share some of my old poems with you sometime --orally. Thank you very much! Not just one snap but three, clearly impressed 😁 thanks for noting your favourite parts and I’m glad you found something in the poem that resonated. Would love to hear some of your old poems (and new… I don’t think you ever lose such talents surely?) 😂
Salmario Posted December 15, 2023 Report Posted December 15, 2023 This is such a beautiful and very moving piece, describing that special bond of love and trust. Emotive and powerful, you have said so much with an economy of language and tremendous grace. Your gift with words is a blessing to us all. Thank you, Littlest. 1 1
Littlest Posted December 15, 2023 Author Report Posted December 15, 2023 11 minutes ago, Salmario said: This is such a beautiful and very moving piece, describing that special bond of love and trust. Emotive and powerful, you have said so much with an economy of language and tremendous grace. Your gift with words is a blessing to us all. Thank you, Littlest. This is such a kind comment. Thank you so much for your words! I am so glad that you enjoyed it and that you were able to identify with the poem in some way too. I wish you a wonderful day 😁 1
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