So... i've always Liked writing poetry since Teenage years

[LDEv]

Most if not all are about females obviously.  Here's my most recent (although been years a year or so since i've written)
Lmk what you think:
 

She walks with a cloak

Hoping never to be seen

She's a lab surrounded by pitbulls

Yeah she's a different breed

 

And I'm the only one who notices

What's underneath

Although at times our life's a circus

You're no freak to me

 

And I swear she'd shine so bright

But she tries to hide her bruises

She only reveals her cards at night

to find out she always loses

 

It's hard to keep your head up high

When being told you needa duck

Doesnt want to take the chance of hurting.....

Cuz she was never good with luck.

 

I don't feel it, I won't feel it

I'm numb to it all

Meet with the miracle worker molly

So my spirit won't fall

 

Im okay I'm fine

No need to worry or call

Im not mad or sad

Just empty is all

[ChildishMaster]

That was awesome dude! The beginning reminded me of Lord Byron a little bit.