"the angels love" a poem for my love on our anniversary

[Guest little Al :P]

so, this is a little poem i wrote for my partner. basically talking about how my life was before, and after meeting her

 

i don't think it's that good but she seemed to love it, so i'm gonna post it... please don't be mean if you don't think it's at least decent       

 

although some feedback would be nice 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She was unsure,

Unsure of what she was meant to do 

She questioned everything she did

 

She was popular but yet, still alone,

Never alone but empty 

She smiled and laughed 

But it was all fake

 

She had cuts and bruises 

checkered over her body 

Felt she deserved the pain 

Like that was all she was

 Was the pain

 

She always felt out of place wherever she went 

Even in her own house 

With her family & her friends 

Out of place 

 

She tried to end her life

Many times she tried 

She never seen what she could be 

She could never really see herself being older

Even just a week older

Always thought she’d be dead before the next week came around

 

She looked happy

But it was fake 

She didn’t know what to do 

She felt lost and alone 

 

Till she met an angel 

Although the angel didn’t see it

She had helped her get out of the dark hole she was in 

 

She made her smile and laugh 

Not fake, real and sweet 

 

She liked the angel

She felt safe 

 

And in time she began to love the angel 

She didn’t realize it at first 

She never knew what it felt like 

      To love 

She told herself it was just a crush 

That it would go away

 

But her feelings grew stronger 

so she told the angel how she felt 

And the angel felt the same 

 

They started dating and quickly things began to change 

 

Her cuts & bruises stopped 

She didn’t feel alone anymore

Her missing piece was found 

She felt happy all the time 

Her laugh was never fake 

        She was loved 

 

          She was safe 

Edited January 13, 2020 by little Al :P