Do you feel this darkness too ? When a Bad Daddy comes to call

[ktownDaddy]

I was going through old emails and found something I wrote sometime ago for a beautiful girl, a different girl and the little masochist who changed my life.

 

Though most of you wont enjoy the words or underlying tone. There maybe be one of two of you is resonates with. This is for you and the struggles you live with inside the darkness if your mind.

 

Regardless all feedback is welcome.

 

 

Darkness

 

 

 

I want to see inside,

Your twisted mind.

To find those secrets,

that you hide.

 

Feel your darkness,

fill my soul,

And let you know,

you are not alone.

 

I want to walk with you,

That darkness deep,

To find those visions,

that you seek.

 

Then brush away,

those thoughts of fear.

As I whisper nightmares,

In your ear.

 

I want to watch you body,

bend in pain,

See black souled tears,

Fall like rain.

 

Then mark your body

Crimson red,

As you count for me,

Inside your head.

 

I want own to your body;

Rule your mind,

Make you submit to me -

so unjustly kind.

 

Make you beg forgivess,

To Lord above,

As I feed your heart,

With the blackest love.

 

Known

[Guest secretlylittle]

Thank you for sharing, it definitely hit me right in the chest.

[ktownDaddy]

You are welcome and thank you for your comments.

[Guest Mister Grey]

its satisfying....isn't it

[Lolli]

Love this

[ThePoet]

The concept is a little simple and not entirely successful, the rhyme is too obvious and the structure much less so. Room for improvement, but you have a solid launching point. A solid 7/10 for effort.