ThePoet Posted January 30, 2018 Report Posted January 30, 2018 (edited) I didn't want to swim and yet I'm wet already. I guess I'm living in the liquid. I'm conditioned heavy. Repetition: thinking that I'll only take a dip in. Within a minute I'll be sipping seawater freely 'til I'm sinking in it. It's a pattern; it's a battle. I'm mostly afloat. I travel flat like a boat, soaked. I'm over-addled. I never learnt any strokes; I only know to paddle. Turn a stack of cash to a puddle: splutter, splash and a waggle. Waking naked, straight to skinny-dipping. I'd hate to have to leave until I guarantee I'm dripping. I tried to stay away: I'm tired of the waves. The water makes me nauseous, no desire for the taste But I'm drawn, incautious, to the various sources Where an Aquarius can fare without a care in his cortex. I swore I wouldn't; if I listened, I'd be proud. I'm a fish and I can flounder. I'll be swimming 'til I drown. Edited January 30, 2018 by MrEver 5
ThePoet Posted January 30, 2018 Author Report Posted January 30, 2018 This piece is about alcoholism, wherein swimming is used as a metaphor for drinking. If you or anyone you know are struggling, I wish all of the positivity. Be strong. Stay dry.
Guest Mister Grey Posted January 30, 2018 Report Posted January 30, 2018 very cool. The pace gives me a hip hop vibe 1
ThePoet Posted January 30, 2018 Author Report Posted January 30, 2018 Thanks, Grey. I like a good rolling flow, when the words have their own momentum.
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