Softheart's Songs

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart

[Wolfycheeks]

Can I give you some advice? I'm gonna give you some advice.

 

In some songs (not all) it looks more like you're looking for whatever rhymes with the previous sentence/things you started with than you actually focusing on what you want to write about, like 'oh, this word rhymes with this so i guess i'll have to change it up somehow so it all fits together' which makes it look hasty and a bit lazy.. it doesn't have to be AB, AB, AB all the time.. i'd change up the rhytm patterns or try writing in a different style, as this gets boring and repetitive very quick.

 

In some of your songs it does work out though, where it does look more thought out than the others.. I do like your songs !!

[Guest DaddySoftheart]

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Edited December 17, 2017 by DaddySoftheart