Are you ready for another bad poem?

[Guest Little_Lia]

I went for a walk at nearly 10pm at night.

I let the wind soak my face,

And the rain tangle my hair.

 

I went for a walk at nearly 10pm.

I stood in the park under a streetlamp,

And let the energy around me make the trees bend,

And cast shadows by my feet.

 

I went for a walk.

To feel the energy.

To feel the earth.

To feel something.

 

I went.

But the storm didn't tell me how to feel.

How am I supposed to feel?

 

June 5th // 22:20

 

yes it's an fob reference. listen to the song rat a tat because hey that's how i'm feeling

[PrincessClara]

Nothin bad about this poem! I think it's great! 

[RitzClick]

How is this poem bad? I think it's quite nice!