Guest thepoet Posted March 20, 2017 Report Posted March 20, 2017 (edited) I dreamt last night that we walked together. A penny for your thoughts; we could talk forever. I'd never met a girl as endearing to me, as you shared all your cares and your fears with me. You caught my attention; every word, every sentence; and every single syllable mentioned. I meant to confide that I'd dreamt of a time our affections were destined, but kept it inside. I dreamt last night that I held your hand. I felt so grand I couldn't help but dance. I felt so nervous it hurt. We were thinking in sync, so we didn't need to murmur a word. I whisked you near and couldn't wish for more, as I whispered your ear full of whimsical thoughts. You laughed and my heart skipped half of a beat. I was far from a calm; it was hard to believe. I dreamt last night that I kissed your lips, and your cheek and your head, your hand and your wrist, and your neck and your mouth at the corners. More-or-less flawless, I thought you were gorgeous. My palms were placed either side of your face: I admired the mind in behind of your gaze. I could float in your eyes for an ocean of time. When you told me to hold you, I hoped to oblige. I dreamt last night that you smiled at me, so I didn't want to rise: I desired my sleep. I didn't want to leave; no, I wanted to stay. I was afraid that I'd wake and you'd wander away. I opened my eyes and I hoped to find you, but I woke up alone. My home's beside you, and I'm homeless. When you aren't close, I'm hopeless. You're my rose, and I want to be the reason you grow best. Edited July 1, 2017 by thepoet 4
Guest faerybunny Posted March 20, 2017 Report Posted March 20, 2017 Beautiful! From one poet to another thank you for sharing!
Guest thepoet Posted July 1, 2017 Report Posted July 1, 2017 Oh wowsers. I just found out that this poem is going to be printed in a book, an anthology of love poems! Nervous and excited...
Guest ~*~Sachita~*~ Posted July 1, 2017 Report Posted July 1, 2017 That's amazing! Congratulations!!! It really is a beautiful poem. Let us know when the book comes out.
minahbird Posted July 4, 2017 Report Posted July 4, 2017 Congratulations!! I've always wanted to have some of my writing published, you must be so proud!!
Guest thepoet Posted July 5, 2017 Report Posted July 5, 2017 I'm surprised I was picked, but I'm glad it was for this poem. It's one of my favourites. I probably wouldn't have had the guts to try if not for the incredible feedback from this community. Thank you all. You're too kind.
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