Asiatic Black poem

[Tiger_Corn]

Still needs work. Open to constructive criticism

 

 

Asiatic Black

By:Tiger_Corn

 

 

I remember when first you chimed into my life, when you slipped upon my gaze. Yes, moon bear. Who makes my heart race and steadies my pace.

 

Rushing by the smudged class Payne i caught a  distorted  slither 

 

Immediately i stop, step two paces back,and  pivote , off went a Trigger.

 

Then I SAW YOU.  The fog incapable of shrouding your figure clear as a new moon, late on a winter's day

 

There  stood a  beastial man, course , aggressive, and Stern . 7ins taller & 4x  my  size, mane unkempt a beard as unmanageable as the crown that ascends from my head .

 

Our eye meant, his and mines,

 

his The color of honey when birthed Sun kissed  eucalyptus,  intense and calming how.. fitting for the color to match your gaze

 

I pined  for my moon bear from the very first day

 

  Foolish of me to have ever presumed my moon was impervious, Desolate from of rage

 

Sill I took up arm and  clashed with my restraints to offer a docile wave Asudden delight fell upon his face ; I continued on my way.