Guest tempest Posted August 22, 2016 Report Posted August 22, 2016 (edited) Little Hearts Play your part little girl inside, Bat your eyes, show your thighs. Let him tell you each move to make, Show him your treasures, do not let him know you faked. Take on your role, lose all self control. Give him what he wants, a whore that blushes and flaunts. Do you feel better now, I wonder? Less of a mess, more like a wonder. He does not care what you need, He just wants to use you and leave. You were too easy to get what is real. Too impatient to know what it is like to truly feel. The fake persona he portrayed, Now you lay alone, betrayed. Be patient little heart, There are real men out there to Cherish you, who will not depart. The one that will give you his soul, The one that ultimately, you my dear, truly control. Do not trust so easy, Do not move so fast, Little one I promise you, One day, love will last. By: lele. Edited November 23, 2016 by tempest 5
Guest #°*Shy-chubby-bunny*°# Posted August 23, 2016 Report Posted August 23, 2016 (edited) I love this! It's beautiful and it says important things! Well done! Everybody should read this! Edited August 23, 2016 by #°*Shy-chubby-bunny*°#
Littlest_Lushie Posted September 7, 2016 Report Posted September 7, 2016 This hits super close to home. About almost 2 years ago I met a man whom claimed to be a Daddy, and I was so so lonely and craving that love and nurturing that I just fell into it. He ended up hitting and abusing me. Now, I'm with my current Daddy whom is the love of my life. I still struggle a lot and I just wish every young and lonely little knew this. I don't want others to make the same mistake that I did.
sammyxoxo Posted November 19, 2016 Report Posted November 19, 2016 This means a lot to me. I was emotionally and sexually abused by a guy who at the time was my daddy and said he loved me. I had never really felt cared for or loved before so I stayed with him for a long time. It really affected me, but I'm hoping that some day I will be able to find the right person that I love and can love me truly.
hime Posted November 21, 2016 Report Posted November 21, 2016 (edited) "Do not trust so easy, Do not move so fast,Little one I promise you,One day, love will last." This is so cute Im gonna cry~ Thank you for share Edited November 21, 2016 by hime
iJoeyMonster Posted November 21, 2016 Report Posted November 21, 2016 Wow, this brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful work!
ktownDaddy Posted November 26, 2016 Report Posted November 26, 2016 It's sad to read about the hurt and pain of a little girl. It's sad to think there are Daddy's out there that would take advantage and hurt a little. I felt compelled to put something down from a Daddy's side - something that shows how I feel a Daddy should act and how a relationship should be. Enjoy the read and let me know your thoughts. The is no greater dynamic, Than a Daddy and his girl. He should be her mountain, She should be his world. It's a bond based on friendship, That's both innocent and grand She will be the student He will be her hand. It's pure trust and giving Dropping doubt and fear She is seaking wisdom He should be her Seer. This bond will bring them closer As love will fill the raphe He will accept and own her She will then feel safe. Her gift will be submission Dominance his reward She will be the servant He shall be the Lord Her sexuality presented It will be taken an devoured He will be Dark wolf She will deflowered. Experience will gift her With more than girlish charms He will be the Ropester She bound legs and arms Her mind will no boundaries Now an even open door He will be the river She the broken shore The tempest and the thunder The magic and the night He will be the maestro She will sing delight Lessons will turn to knowledge A novice learns to lead She will take and own him He will learn to bleed The parts will come full circle And two shall become one Her will be the Master She his only one This is the true dynamic Of how the puzzle fits She will be his lifeblood And - He will love that girl to bits. 3
Guest cinderella Posted December 6, 2016 Report Posted December 6, 2016 That's a beautiful poem. Thank you all for the comments. Lele
~LittleRaven~ Posted December 21, 2016 Report Posted December 21, 2016 Really powerful poems. Beautiful:)
Guest lil_doll Posted December 31, 2016 Report Posted December 31, 2016 (edited) This is just beautiful. I love it. Edited December 31, 2016 by lil_doll
ktownDaddy Posted January 2, 2017 Report Posted January 2, 2017 Thank you for the nice comments - always appreciated. I enjoy writing and have not had the time and energy for a few years. This was quick and off the top of my head. I am glad you enjoyed. Cheers KTown
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