Guest Kya Posted August 6, 2016 Report Posted August 6, 2016 Sitting on my bosom, Is a little man Calling himself to be things Even he doesn't think he can My body is his and his alone To mark up as he pleases Where lips and hands roam freely Giving out tickles and teases Sitting on his lap Is a little woman Wanting herself to be things Even she doesn't think she can Daddies are nice Daddies are kind Kya hopes soon To find a Daddy She can call "Mine"
Petal Posted August 6, 2016 Report Posted August 6, 2016 I love the dichotomy between these! You're a lovely poet, both sides of you.
Guest annemarie Posted August 6, 2016 Report Posted August 6, 2016 i agree with petal!! though the only thing i'd suggest is making the second poem longer and formatted similarly to the first one if you want them to be a matched set or part of the same series
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