Story Feedback?

[Guest Ginger-Kit22]

Hi hi everyone ^^" I've been working hard on a story and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it? It's on Wattpad though, so you'd need an account to view it >~< There's currently 3 chapters.

 

The little description of it is, "Illegally sold by her parents at the age of 9, Kit has been the property of a Wolf Pack for the past 10 years. Forced to endure their punishments and shown no love, she's grown mistrustful of Wolves. When a loner shows up and offers a way out, can she look past what the Pack did to her and trust him?"

 

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/62609172-rescue-me